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Poison Apple by AbsoluteUncertainty Poison Apple by AbsoluteUncertainty
I finally finished my first painting using Painter 12! I bought it several weeks ago, but it wasn't working so I had to contact some people and through a very long and complicated process I finally have a working program! ^-^ Anyway this is a picture of Snow White and Rose Red eating a poisoned apple. Hope you like it.
It is a pretty drawing. The eyes especially. The hair curls are awesome.
The strokes of swirls look fancy.

Things I see that needs a bit of work:
Her fingers. They sort of become thin at the end though and that is somewhat strange.
The highlights of the apple. See this: [link]
The lighter parts aren't really curved lines, instead they're more of roundish.
Background part. Somehow the white doesn't really suit it here. Maybe add a gradient? It'd be more interesting.
Text part. It's a nice addition there but why not make it more visible and not too at the edge? Bring it more into the picture and have some outline thing so it's there and more part of the picture.
Shading. Add more. It's cool. I understand that in a white area there would not be much, but it's still there.
Just a bit, but there. And have a mix of soft and hard edged shading.

Sorry if I sound evil.
What do you think?
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Submitted on
December 1, 2012
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